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    Post by J2ie Fri Feb 04, 2011 12:14 pm


    RP Character: Nisuginai Junsuke

    Basic Techniques:

    1.Shunpo: (Low)
    2.Ikkotsu (Single Bone): (Low)
    3.Hado #33 Sokatsui: (Low)

    Advanced Techniques:

    1.Sōkotsu (Double Bone): (Low)
    2.Bakudo #61 Rikujokoro: (Low)
    2.Bakudo #79 Kuyo Shibari: (Low)

    Superior Techniques:


    Unique Techniques:

    1.Shikai:

    . Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): Fires a highly condensed spiritual energy from the blade, Junsuke is able to change the shape and size of the energy. This technique is capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. : (Low)

    . Hitenshou(Flying Heaven Space-Time): This technique allows the user to instantaneously teleport to any place where the user's sword is, the sword can also be teleport back to the user at anytime. : (Low)

    . Energy Generation: It allows Junsuke to generate highly condensed spiritual energy to use them which he can shape it or change the size of the energy to use as a projectile or as a physical weapon. : (Low)

    2.Bankai:

    . Enhanced Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): When used in bankai these potent blasts are redish-black with a red outline, and have explosively augmented power and speed.

    . Enhanced Energy Generation: It is the same as when used in shikai but when used in bankai the power are enchnced to a new level and can produces an incredibly-destructive explosion on impact causing large scale destruction to large portion of the surroundings depending on how Junsuke use it.

    . Enhanced Strength: Junsuke's Bankai also allows him to further enhance his natural great strength.

    . Hyper-Speed Combat: Junsuke takes all the power of his Bankai and compresses it into a small, condensed form. Then, then uses it to perform high-speed combat. His new speed enhances his Flash Step prowess and allows him to create dozens of afterimages to confuse his opponent.

    . Enhanced Agility: His agility grants him great dexterity in battle, able to attack his opponent from various angles with great accuracy.

    . Enhanced Spiritual Power: Junsuke's reiatsu is so intense and rough as well as thick and heavy.

    . Enhanced Bankai Duration: His energy is compressed and usage of his Bankai doesn't expel as much spiritual power as other Bankai from the point of activation; thus allowing him to use it at a much longer duration.

    . Saikou Zankujin(Supreme Evil God):

    After all the training and communications with his Zanpakuto Junsuke gains a new power with him, he sync with his zanpakuto and his reiatsu then flows into his zanpakuto thus leaving him as though he is without reiatsu when in battle and his ability to sense reiatsu has increased greatly as he will be able to pinpoint anyone on their location from a great distance. His zanpakuto's appearance change slighly the tsuba on his Zanpakuto turns a little bigger when he takes this form and he retains all his Zanpakuto's abilities and also enhances all of his zanpakuto's abilities and also all his physical abilities which they are all raise to it's absolute limits.

    Tensatsu(Everything is Nothing): This move will send whoever Junsuke is looking and cast the illusion of Armaggendon to all of your opponents. This is caused by Junsuke's massive spiritual and seeping energy of his new form attack powering out to invision "The End" anyone (that you are staring at) will suddenly be overwhelmed by fear that make Junsuke seems like the reincarnation of their fear, this illusion also controls the five sense of the person until the built up power is released. The real attack is a powerful blast of energy that is fired at his opponent as the energy does not just blast through it will make sure that whatever it is blasting is dissolve by it's power before blasting through also Junsuke's voice seems to be amplify as though he is talking down his opponent from heaven. : (Low)
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    Post by Jenova Fri Feb 04, 2011 12:57 pm

    Tech sheet not Approved.
    Shikai and Bankai are -way- too OP. please downplay both.

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    Post by J2ie Fri Feb 04, 2011 1:24 pm

    RP Character: Nisuginai Junsuke

    Basic Techniques:

    1.Shunpo: (Low)
    2.Ikkotsu (Single Bone): (Low)
    3.Hado #33 Sokatsui: (Low)

    Advanced Techniques:

    1.Sōkotsu (Double Bone): (Low)
    2.Bakudo #61 Rikujokoro: (Low)
    2.Bakudo #79 Kuyo Shibari: (Low)

    Superior Techniques:


    Unique Techniques:

    1.Shikai:

    . Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): Fires a highly condensed spiritual energy from the blade, Junsuke is able to change the shape and size of the energy. This technique is capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. : (Low)

    . Hitenshou(Flying Heaven Space-Time): This technique allows the user to instantaneously teleport to any place where the user's sword is, the sword can also be teleport back to the user at anytime. : (Low)

    . Energy Generation: It allows Junsuke to generate highly condensed spiritual energy to use them which he can shape it or change the size of the energy to use as a projectile or as a physical weapon. : (Low)

    2.Bankai:

    . Enhanced Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): When used in bankai these potent blasts are redish-black with a red outline, and have explosively augmented power and speed.

    . Enhanced Energy Generation: It is the same as when used in shikai but when used in bankai the power are enchnced to a new level and can produces an incredibly-destructive explosion on impact causing large scale destruction to large portion of the surroundings depending on how Junsuke use it.

    . Enhanced Strength: Junsuke's Bankai also allows him to further enhance his natural great strength.

    . Hyper-Speed Combat: Junsuke takes all the power of his Bankai and compresses it into a small, condensed form. Then, then uses it to perform high-speed combat. His new speed enhances his Flash Step prowess and allows him to create dozens of afterimages to confuse his opponent.

    . Enhanced Agility: His agility grants him great dexterity in battle, able to attack his opponent from various angles with great accuracy.

    . Enhanced Spiritual Power: Junsuke's reiatsu is so intense and rough as well as thick and heavy.

    . Enhanced Bankai Duration: His energy is compressed and usage of his Bankai doesn't expel as much spiritual power as other Bankai from the point of activation; thus allowing him to use it at a much longer duration.
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    Post by Jenova Fri Feb 04, 2011 6:31 pm

    Not yet approved, please either downplay all of your abilities, or drop some abilities.
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    Post by J2ie Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:26 pm

    RP Character: Nisuginai Junsuke

    Basic Techniques:

    1.Shunpo: (Low)
    2.Ikkotsu (Single Bone): (Low)
    3.Hado #33 Sokatsui: (Low)

    Advanced Techniques:

    1.Sōkotsu (Double Bone): (Low)
    2.Bakudo #61 Rikujokoro: (Low)
    2.Bakudo #79 Kuyo Shibari: (Low)

    Superior Techniques:


    Unique Techniques:

    1.Shikai:

    . Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): Fires a highly condensed spiritual energy from the blade, Junsuke is able to change the shape and size of the energy. This technique is capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. : (Low)

    . Hitenshou(Flying Heaven Space-Time): This technique allows the user to instantaneously teleport to any place where the user's sword is, the sword can also be teleport back to the user at anytime. : (Low)

    . Energy Generation: It allows Junsuke to generate highly condensed spiritual energy to use them which he can shape it or change the size of the energy to use as a projectile or as a physical weapon. : (Low)

    2.Bankai:

    . Enhanced Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): When used in bankai these potent blasts are redish-black with a red outline, and have explosively augmented power and speed.

    . Enhanced Strength: Junsuke's Bankai also allows him to further enhance his natural great strength.

    . Hyper-Speed Combat: Junsuke takes all the power of his Bankai and compresses it into a small, condensed form. Then, then uses it to perform high-speed combat. His new speed enhances his Flash Step prowess and allows him to create dozens of afterimages to confuse his opponent.

    . Enhanced Spiritual Power: Junsuke's reiatsu is so intense and rough as well as thick and heavy.

    . Enhanced Bankai Duration: His energy is compressed and usage of his Bankai doesn't expel as much spiritual power as other Bankai from the point of activation; thus allowing him to use it at a much longer duration.
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    Post by Jenova Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:46 pm

    Not approved yet:


    • In your bankai, you're talking about enhancements of strength, agility, etc. Be more detailed. -How much- more does it get increased? (for example 50% more strength, etc). Also make sure these numbers aren't too high, as you're still boosting up lots of stuff at the same time. (quantity thing again)
    • Enhanced Bankai Duration - You have lots of bankai abilities running at the same time. this -has- to mean you'll lose lots of rei on it, it doesn't really make any sense compared to all of those bankai abilities.
    • Hyper-Speed Combat - Again, be detailed. How many afterimages? and not too many like a few dozen. even 10 is too much, if you plan on keeping the rest of your bankai abilities.
    • Your shikai is still the same as last time - Too OP. Limit the strength of your Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven).
    • Hitenshou(Flying Heaven Space-Time) - too OP as well. downplay it. either make a weakness in it (for example, it fatigues the user after few uses) or make it less strong.
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    Post by J2ie Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:04 pm

    RP Character: Nisuginai Junsuke

    Basic Techniques:

    1.Shunpo: (Low)
    2.Ikkotsu (Single Bone): (Low)
    3.Hado #33 Sokatsui: (Low)

    Advanced Techniques:

    1.Sōkotsu (Double Bone): (Low)
    2.Bakudo #61 Rikujokoro: (Low)
    2.Bakudo #79 Kuyo Shibari: (Low)

    Superior Techniques:


    Unique Techniques:

    1.Shikai:

    . Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): Fires a highly condensed spiritual energy from the blade, Junsuke is able to change the shape and size of the energy. This technique is capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. : (Low)


    2.Bankai:

    . Enhanced Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): When used in bankai these potent blasts are redish-black with a red outline, and have explosively augmented power and speed.

    . Enhanced Strength: Junsuke's Bankai also allows him to further enhance his natural great strength(50% more).

    . Hyper-Speed Combat: Junsuke takes all the power of his Bankai and compresses it into a small, condensed form. Then, then uses it to perform high-speed combat. His new speed enhances his Flash Step prowess and allows him to create dozens of afterimages to confuse his opponent.

    . Enhanced Spiritual Power: Junsuke's reiatsu is so intense and rough as well as thick and heavy.

    . Enhanced Bankai Duration: His energy is compressed and usage of his Bankai doesn't expel as much spiritual power as other Bankai from the point of activation; thus allowing him to use it at a much longer duration.
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    Post by Jenova Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:09 pm

    Almost there J2ie o.o"


    • Hyper-Speed Combat - Still needs an exact number of how many afterimages. And dozens is simply too much. it can be such a high number.
    • Still didn't listen too good to me. In your Bankai, specify how much your abilities gets increased. You've only done it with strength now. Enhanced Satsugaten, Hyper-Speed Combat (how much faster), Enhanced Spiritual Power and Enhanced Bankai Duration


    Your shikai is good now though ^^ we're getting there.
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    Post by J2ie Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:01 am

    RP Character: Nisuginai Junsuke

    Basic Techniques:

    1.Shunpo: (Low)
    2.Ikkotsu (Single Bone): (Low)
    3.Hado #33 Sokatsui: (Low)

    Advanced Techniques:

    1.Sōkotsu (Double Bone): (Low)
    2.Bakudo #61 Rikujokoro: (Low)
    2.Bakudo #79 Kuyo Shibari: (Low)

    Superior Techniques:


    Unique Techniques:

    1.Shikai:

    . Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven): Fires a highly condensed spiritual energy from the blade, Junsuke is able to change the shape and size of the energy. This technique is capable of causing large-scale damage and destruction. : (Low)


    2.Bankai:

    .Enhanced Satsugaten(Crashing Heaven) 30%

    .Enhanced Strength 20%

    .Hyper-Speed Combat: 70% Junsuke's Bankai also allows him to further enhance his Flash Step prowess (70% faster Shunpo) which results in the creation of 8 afterimages to confuse his opponent. (passive ability)
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    Post by Zeraso Dendu Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:36 am

    I approve these techs for rp use, have fun.

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